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Running Commentary's first publication!
23-08-2015, 10:45 AM,
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RE: Running Commentary's first publication!
(23-08-2015, 09:19 AM)EMid Life Crisis Marathon Man Wrote:
(23-08-2015, 08:26 AM)tomroper Wrote: Sweder showed me a copy at parkrun yesterday; I knew at once that I must have a copy. Ordered today

I ran part of it through the Hemingway Editor app today and it wasn't very impressed. Too many long sentences and way too many adverbs for its liking. 

Christ, remind me never to dump any of my stuff into that contraption. It may just implode.

The harder the conflict, the more glorious the triumph

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RE: Running Commentary's first publication! - by Sweder - 23-08-2015, 10:45 AM

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